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Titles: "Sweet", and "Bitter"
Characters: Ninth Doctor, Jack, Rose
Rating: Teen
Summary: Goes with Candy.


The lad must be aware of the effect he has on people. On the Doctor.

Jack flirts with little glances, smiles fired off like projectiles. Very smooth. And very sincere.

When the Doctor doesn't want to resist anymore, he pulls Jack abruptly (gently) up, just long enough to take his mouth and let it go again, press himself against Jack's strong body, and savor his delicious shock. The way his hands clutch at the Doctor's shoulders.

It's wrong, a bad mistake, because he never touches his companions that way. But he won't regret it yet. Jack's lips were so sweet.


Rose is too young, too innocent, and too human. The Doctor never lets himself forget all the reasons he's not allowed to want her.

He pauses outside her room one evening. The door is a heavy one, a solid barrier against him, but he can hear shrieks and giggles inside -- what are they doing in there? As if he couldn't guess. And he wonders at the hurt that he feels. He knows if he knocks, they'll ask him in.

He doesn't knock. He turns away, feeling his tongue curl behind his teeth and the longing in his hearts turn bitter.


Date: 2011-03-02 12:08 pm (UTC)
yamx: (Default)
From: [personal profile] yamx
These are very aptly named. The first one OS very sweet, and the second one is heartbreaking.

Date: 2011-03-02 05:24 pm (UTC)
ext_17795: (Default)
From: [identity profile] dshael.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad to get the right reactions. ;)

Date: 2011-03-02 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flydye8.livejournal.com
Both of these are wonderful and named perfectly. Nicely done

Date: 2011-03-02 05:25 pm (UTC)
ext_17795: (Default)
From: [identity profile] dshael.livejournal.com
Thanks! Titles are tough for me, so that may be the first time I've ever heard that. *g*

Date: 2011-03-02 03:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azn-jack-fiend.livejournal.com
These were both fantastic.

Date: 2011-03-02 05:25 pm (UTC)
ext_17795: (Default)
From: [identity profile] dshael.livejournal.com
Thank you! Glad you liked. :)

Date: 2011-03-02 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sahiya.livejournal.com
Awwww, Doctor! *shakes him*

Tell me there will be more! You must fix!

Date: 2011-03-02 05:28 pm (UTC)
ext_17795: (grin)
From: [identity profile] dshael.livejournal.com
*ggg* It's Nine! He can't help it!

It's not impossible that there would be more. But they haven't told me what happens next.

Date: 2011-03-03 12:21 am (UTC)
ext_348818: Jack Harkness. (Nine)
From: [identity profile] canaana.livejournal.com
Silly Doctor. When do we get the part where he comes to his senses? (Or Rose and Jack bring his senses to him, as the case may be).

Date: 2011-03-03 03:10 am (UTC)
ext_17795: (Default)
From: [identity profile] dshael.livejournal.com
They've got their work cut out, don't they? *g* Thanks for reading.

Date: 2011-03-03 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] redpearl-cao.livejournal.com
oh, Doctor...

Date: 2011-03-03 10:50 pm (UTC)
ext_17795: (Default)
From: [identity profile] dshael.livejournal.com
I KNOW. *g*

Date: 2011-07-07 12:40 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kaffyr
I finally got around to reading these, and now I wish I had read them far sooner; they're bitter-sweet, and so very, very true to Nine's nature.

Date: 2011-07-07 01:01 am (UTC)
ext_17795: (Default)
From: [identity profile] dshael.livejournal.com
Never hurts to save something for later. :) I'm glad you liked them; thanks for commenting.


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